All Comments on 'Life's Not A Porn Movie Ch. 03'

Naming the story "Life's not a porn movie" yet deliver just one loaded porn scene one after another with incest nowhere is sight........might wanna change the category or actually find your creative balls and write some goddamn incest!

Im loving the stories but this chapter made me despise chrissy so much, cock blocking him then letting his best friend take her anal virginity while he had to watch, and then getting angry that he had sex with alex. I hope that he fucks all her friends in front of her and does the same to rebecca and just leave her hanging for ever.

apparently that first anonymous has no patience or stamina...

Tho there is one valid point... life certainly does seem like a porn movie in this chapter

Seriously, first you make it so that there's a connection between them and then you make them do things and then what? You make it seem like she's a bitch and they don't care about each other. I mean come on I was loving the story because it felt like you were making them have a real connection and were leading to a SPECIAL moment and then this? What were you thinking? I really hope you make up for this because otherwise I'm not even going to finish the story.

Oh and sorry forgot to mention, where's the incest?????

I like how you are bulding this stoy. Ending it like that made me want to know what will happen in the next story.

Keep writing this series i believe it will be great

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Started great, disastrous in page four.

way to royally fuck up everything you built up. mitch and chris should have never ever happened in any shape or form and you completely ruined this story now. im not even bothering with any other chapters after you just crapped all over your set up. so very disappointed. thanks for the wasting my time.

I MIGHT EVEN DROP TO 2 if I had it over again.

You do not fuck his sister it in only EROTIC COUPLINGS

Really enjoying your slow build. The incest element not strong in this installment but the story arc is great. Looking forward to the last two parts.

It's always better nice and slow. Waiting for your next chapter.

I'm not sure what the other commenters are on about, this was a good story. The conflict between siblings seems more interesting than a completely simple narrative. Humans are jealous and self destructive by nature. Looking forward to next chapter.

I thought this is an incest sibling story. Very disappointed.

mitch fucked his sister not him???

Surely the author has another chapter where the brother and sister get it on

It's time to release the final 2 chapters discussed at the beginning of this chapter. I hope they contain the hopes, dreams, desires of T. and Chrissy, along with the usual twists of jealousy and humiliation. Please, bring this to conclusion.

Great story but it needs finished! Please

kinda messed up chrissy can have mitch do her but her brother isnt supposed to get anything piss on that