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All Comments on 'Like a Dream'

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timagiotimagioover 9 years ago
Very good. Well thought out.

Very good so far. I got the vibe in the force shop fast. Interesting but a few spelling and grammar errors. Other than that excellent b

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 9 years ago
Changed horses mid-stream

The story starts out with the focus on Michael, but ends with Jessica and her dream as the focal point. It made the story a bit disjointed.

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