by RockStarGod
As is so often the case 'Anonymous' is a pathetic ignoramus. The story can stand alone but it would be fun to see what happens. Jenny should message Ray back ...
I liked the story and it was a good read.
Could it be better with a bit of editing? Sure.
I always notice it is the assholes that hide under Anonymous that give bad reviews. .
Get some editing done and please write the next chapter!
Thanks for posting! (And set your Phaser to "ignore the trolls.")