All Comments on 'Like Mother, Like Daughter'

Great story of denial. I love this sort of fantasy, although I would never want it this severe in reality! There are a lot of typos, I'm guessing English isn't your first language so great effort. Maybe ask for someone here to edit your work? Great writing none the less. Thanks for sharing with us. Hope to see more!

Most enjoyable, credible, hot and well-written. As the previous post said, you could possibly use some assistance in presentation but this was a terrific tale. More please, and have five big shiny ones from me.

Hope there is a second chapter about the next stage of his training. Love the MIL aspect so much!!!

Couldn't get past first page, sorry but too many run together sentences

Well, no pussy is worth THAT much denial! lol

But, I really enjoyed the story...actually, I was expecting that Zarah would be using him for sexual service also...that could be very hot!

Hope you continue the story...it's pretty good.

A good read . I hope you can put another 2 or 3 pages to continue it , maybe with a strong involvement of the Mother , maybe her friends and the daughter. Better than lots of the stories that finish at the end of one page and which are often too short and finish abruptly without

real Finish.

..and the story wasn't worth the pain.

Loved it, esp when mothers friends got involved, just hope I can 1 day be in the same situation

The cage is a toy. He can remove it with a couple of household tools in less than 30 seconds so who had the key made absolutely no difference. What Jerry did was realize he had both pride and self respect and that his bitch wife had no love or respect for him. So he divorced her. She may have complained but guess what? No-fault divorce is the law and Jerry didn't need her permission or her agreement. All he needed to do was remove himself from the cancer that was masquerading as his wife. This was just awful. Thoroughly unlikeable characters made reading this no fun. It wasn't worth the time spent. Glad you stopped posting. You can't write for a hill of beans. 1 star only because negative stars aren't yet available.

i would have walked told her to fuck of and never came back

This is very disturbing story telling.I read all through-no humanity at all

If this is all you go,t stop writing and take up knitting!

thanks for writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

yeah yeah it's a fantasy. BUT why would anyone put up with this crap.

What a piece of garbage. U have zero talent

The story is great, please continue

I dominate my husband but psychologically and it took me years to fully dominate

I want to be owned and trained by a mother in law !!! I'm in love with this story !!! Please come true !!!

The story is excellent. However the written English is terrible and it badly needs correcting. I’m surprised it was published in this state.