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All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium: Awakened Ch. 02'

by maestro84

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tentaclesforalltentaclesforallabout 6 years ago
You came a very long way from your first Mood Slime stories

The fairy summoning stories were already much more detailed, the characters more lifelike and the stories more intricate. You started coming into your own with Vampires don't sparkle,

But with Lilith's Emporium you are really really starting to shine.

The progression has been amazing to see!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
As good as the first chapter...

Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep them coming!

Another great chapter. You are one of my favorite authors so keep it up. I'm sure you've got plenty of thoughts to keep this going for a while.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yosh!

Selena with the save! All right!

Onewhoknows12Onewhoknows12about 6 years ago
Just as good as the first

Eagerly awaiting the last bit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Minor wording nitpick

It's an anachronism for Selena to use the word "paranoid," which dates from 1901. "Mightily fearful and suspicious" might be better.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...