by Goldeniangel
Everything will have its own difficulties if it is first time. The girl's uncertainity has come out well, especially when she worries of his erection after the blow job. Good narration.
Actually, impressed by most of your poems, I searched into your site. I would say, you are an excellent poet.
Sorggavaasal
India
I wish I could have been there with Lily for her first time. I love first times and you did a great job writing about Lily's first time.