All Comments on 'Lily's First Time'

I wish I could have been there with Lily for her first time. I love first times and you did a great job writing about Lily's first time.

Wow, that was pretty nice!

Excellent story, well written, very enjoyable

excellebt story, well written

Everything will have its own difficulties if it is first time. The girl's uncertainity has come out well, especially when she worries of his erection after the blow job. Good narration.

Actually, impressed by most of your poems, I searched into your site. I would say, you are an excellent poet.

Sorggavaasal

India