All Comments on 'Ling Gam Ch. 01'

Come on! No stories, no comments! I hate to sit and wait, or I will discontinue my story! Like I wrote, I am open for your idea.

I'm sorry but your english is unreadable . I understand that english is not your native language and it's obvious that you are formulating the sentences in an other language and then translating it since the grammar and syntax are way off. The story might have been interesting but the bad english ruins it.

Agreed with lucka. Bad engrish kill story

I know. My English, Chinese and Swedish is bad to me, but I like to write, and I am a creative person. To be honestly, I have a <b>physical disability</b>.

I like the direction the story seems to be going in. I think you need to find someone to edit the story for you. I love star wars, but the language makes it very hard to read and follow. Keep writing, but find someone that can help with the language.

while the translating might be bad i read it like yoda was talking broken or wrong tense

I take it English is not ur 1st language. Plz get an editor

I find this version of English with a dash of Yoda-ese to quite charming. On the other hand, every writer needs a copy-editor! Simply agree with him or her to leave the 'language' alone and only work on correcting errors. A sensible compromise for all…