by JLCC
Very HOT! You use a different style of writing with your 'inserted comments'. And there were a few spelling and syntax errors. But I'd LOVE to be you with Jennifer.
I'm not a huge incest fan, but your descriptions in the stocking fetish-y scenes was outstanding and absolutely worth it. Well done!
If you want more of Meredith, go specifically to author Mary Anderson. I'm recalling that's where Meredith is more prominent. Note that while a pivotal character, she isn't necessarily the protagonist. She's kind of like Yoda.
This was very very hot. I enjoy your writing very much. The images you've inspired are delicious, I'm looking forward to reading more about these people!
Luscious Lingerie Loving and Lifestyle filled with long legs and lewd licencous lust.I will suck you off for more stories.
I stroked off twice before getting to the end. MORE!!! PLEASE!!!
Great work.
I read you last comment about being more descriptive of your characters. I think you are almost there. Think of simile when writing about your characters. He is chest was chilled as if made of marble. The curve of her ass resembled a juicy peach. The slit in the dress when pulled back like a curtain reveled her treasures. Things like that. Though I have to say my own fetish has me sporting a wet spot in the front of my virgin white panties right now.
A skill I lack is the effective bodily description, making it natural and not just "blonde, 36D, blablablablabla". I was struck with the need as I had a specific view of Jennifer as I was writing, but didn't execute.
I doubt there will be more chapters.
I do appreciate your readership.
Lingerie heels and Mom. My compliments on a job well done.
That was a perfectly wonderful story. Just wish we got a little more description of all of the characters physical characteristics. But it was a brilliant build up.
All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love.