All Comments on 'Lip Slips'

hot story ;)

A perfect name perfectly placed if evan slightly askewed.

Only more perfect around her ankles.

Adults having fun...just sex...But all in teh open...

Well I have just found your stories and have tried to read a number this afternoon (should be working)

Notwithstanding what your critics say, I believe you are a very good writer and you lead us on an erotic journey, where all are satisfied in their own way.

The illustrated stories are particularly good and can lead to excellent mind pictures in the narrative only ones.

Keep it up, I will keep tabs on you both

What an erotic and sensual story.....

This whore was no lady even in the loosest definition.

26thNC..getting offended by an erotic story? why read stories on this site if you think sexually adventurous women are 'whores? ' Pathetic comment really.

Well it certainly got a chuckle out of me. As for it being "erotic", yes to the closeted male living vicariously through a cheating wife, a bit of cock would seem hot to them. Open that door boys and step on out.

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Absolutely beautiful job of writing an erotic and sensual story.

Very rarely have I read such a marvelous description of the interaction between two aroused people (three in this case).

I was able to identify with the feelings as they mirrored my own with my wife.

My complements to the author for some wonderful prose.