All Comments on 'Lisa - Fat Friend of a Friend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Rubbish

Enough said - Rubbish

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Really?!

You consider this writing? You think this PIECE OF CRAP WITH the all-caps, is actually worthy of being posted?

Buried in there was an interesting story concept, but it was completely lost in the actual delivery.

LindsayRaeLindsayRaeover 12 years ago

Wow, you think a size 6 or 8 is fat? Lovely.

You may wish to seek an editor if you decide to write another story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Garbage

If these are your attitudes, you are the kind of guy that gives the rest of us a bad name! Please don't write anymore of this kind of trash. It is demeaning to everyone especially the writer!

bluewillybluebluewillyblueover 12 years ago
Wow to be you, what men you and your buddy are!

I've had skinny and huge and everything in-between, you know what, they wee all human beings who deserved respect.

You don't like fat chicks then maybe you and your asshole buddy should just fuck each other!

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1over 12 years ago

very close minded... it shows in this thing you called a story. very weak from beginning to end

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wow, this sucks

you write shitty, disrespectful, fat girl-hating work

tabbydieseltabbydieselover 10 years ago
close minded writer

What a waste of letters....

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