by c1999
I loved it i am right now sitting in my family room with THE FAMILY reading this shit soaking my fucking panties ...... My hopes my uncle will notice and finger me again...... Dammit this story got me so FUCKING wet
Only wish that I could be "Mr. Michael"
fucking this young gorgeous woman
as I took my hard 8 inch cock and
squirted my potent baby making batter
into her unprotected pussy. Best doctor
story I've read here. OUTSTANDING
I also had a "wtf" moment reading the Japanese student's name. It's not as much racist as it is, like you said, careless, and lets out an awkward feeling to it (like the feeling of confirming Americans are ignorant of anything not American, mixing things up in a really amateurish way). If you can edit your own story, do yourself and future readers a favor :) Just rename the student Hajime Kamagura or Takeshi Yamamoto or simply... make him Chinese :)
Most readers out for quality stories will be put off by gross details like this. Only the ones completely oblivious to the matter (like one commenter here) will not mind... until they know better!
Good story though. Here, a page for inspiration: http://www.japanese-names.org/
Now I know what goes on at the Dr's office on my wife's annual visit.
Thank you to all who liked my story and commented.
I'm sorry I messed up with the name - that was my mistake. My wife was attracted to Asian men, so I put that in the story. Careless - yes, racist - not at all. Stop being so offended. And like one posted said, maybe he WAS adopted by Chinese parents!
As for being terrified for your next exam... if you are, then don't read stories that are about non-consensual sex during a gyno exam!
Enjoy!
Loved this story, I orgasmed quite a bit to this one.
That being said, there were some grammatical errors, didn't notice them much, but there were a few.
The people that are complaining about the last name, really? Its a story about sex, and a really well written one too. Just because the name was not to your liking, does not mean you need to make a fuss about it. Its a name nothing more, really I doubt anyone else noticed or cared.
Loved the story and I will read it many times to come :D
Not even trying to be difficult here, but yeah. As was said, wang is a Chinese name, not Japanese. They aren't the same thing.
Not even taking the cursory google search and making that blanket statement is pretty racist.
This story has been bookmarked - I love it! So much so, that even though I tried to stop my orgasm so I could prolong the pleasure, it (I) came anyway without any further stimulation. Horny as hell!
Unless Mr. Wang was adopted by Chinese parents, his name doesn't make any sense. Wang is distinctly a Chinese name, no Japanese person would have it (I know this for fact, but a simple google should corroborate my assertion).
I enjoyed the rest of the story, but the lack of distinction between Asian cultures in a story where a person from an Asian culture plays a major role really kills it for me. I feel that 5 minutes of background research would have really improved your story.
That was hotter than hot! Can't stop touching myself! When can I get an appointment????