All Comments on 'Lisa's Vacation'

Even if Jeff did lie and there was no plan, I think any wife would be extremely upset with the way this husband treated her, inviting strangers on what was supposed to be a romantic getaway, and then ignoring her the entire time while spending time with another woman. Clearly this marriage would be in serious trouble. I would have liked it better if the wife had told the husband to go to hell at the end. But well told story overall. Thanks for posting.

2nd grade and start over. BYE

1 star

Same ol gay married male shit.

These people acted like we did during middle school dances!

Until the rushed ending.

Needs some serious help.

Same twist at the end with a deceived, naïve woman. You need to give one of your women some backbone and have her seek revenge either my herself or with her own man.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

Hope we find out what happens this weekend Thanks.

hope she got AIDS from Jeff being the no fucking good cheating slut she is

Very erotic - the buildup is well-done. Can't wait to read your next one. :-)

And very well-written. Lucky for Jeff and the slut that Ben and Bev crashed soundly on the first night and were delayed for hours on end the second night. How convenient! If the author does a second chapter, I will throw up if Jeff and the slut get it on without Ben and Bev getting in on the action.

I thought the story was very well written and would like to see what happens next, if anything. If I had a criticism, it would be that this story is so much like most of the rest of them in that the husband never finds out and is totally ignorant. I'm not the kind that thinks the wife should burn in hell but in life there are usually consequences, weather we see them right away or not. Great job and keep writing!

. . . too bad there isn't a sequel!

You told a very good story here. Thanks for palying.

What about telling what happened to Ben & Bev as another great story.

I got lost. Was time away as couples but she spent the entire time with Jeff? And the very first time he tried something no slap in the face?

So it is a story of a willing cheating slut and another slime ball called a best friend.