All Comments on 'Little Brother's Birthday'

by S3lwyncd0g

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hotwillyhotwillyover 7 years ago
Brotherly Love

Hot story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story

This was a good story. The guy who said it was crap is an idiot. Keep making stories. Really enjoyed it.

irishmike73irishmike73over 7 years ago
Word choice

I've seen several authors use the word gauzy to describe fabric. While it is a very descriptive word, I don't think it's a good choice. Gauze is not a nice material. It isn't soft or smooth. Why not just say that she draped a baby blanket or cloth diaper over herself while breastfeeding?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great storyline

At one person who heated it so much is against sex within the family. Or maybe he hates all sex. Too bad for him and he should leave this site. I wonder if he Jenks off in the c

Matt450Matt450over 7 years ago
Excellent

Definitely keep up the great writing! And would love it if you continued the story.

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
amazing story

what a birthday treat

blackknight314blackknight314over 7 years ago
Great story.

Don't you just love the Anonymous COWARDS! An interesting story line. Lots of different ways that you could go with this... PLEASE DO!

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
BEST BIRTHDAY EVER

Wish they were my sisters.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
So Hot

That was such a good and to the point story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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Having two women all over me is a turn on, but watching two lesbo's NO! Would it hel[p this story if the girls brought in a guy friend? He could try to suck bro's dick then fuck his ass???

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago

And with that, they turned little brother into a wussy "toy".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What's next with the 3 of them?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good but short storie

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I love to read really good erotica and daydreamed my own stories as I lay waiting for sleep to come. Some I shared with my wife. Finally she started encouraging me to write and submit them here. I hope you enjoy them.