by S3lwyncd0g
This was a good story. The guy who said it was crap is an idiot. Keep making stories. Really enjoyed it.
I've seen several authors use the word gauzy to describe fabric. While it is a very descriptive word, I don't think it's a good choice. Gauze is not a nice material. It isn't soft or smooth. Why not just say that she draped a baby blanket or cloth diaper over herself while breastfeeding?
At one person who heated it so much is against sex within the family. Or maybe he hates all sex. Too bad for him and he should leave this site. I wonder if he Jenks off in the c
Definitely keep up the great writing! And would love it if you continued the story.
Don't you just love the Anonymous COWARDS! An interesting story line. Lots of different ways that you could go with this... PLEASE DO!
Having two women all over me is a turn on, but watching two lesbo's NO! Would it hel[p this story if the girls brought in a guy friend? He could try to suck bro's dick then fuck his ass???