All Comments on 'Little Lucy and the Big Bad Wolf Ch. 01'

I'm not here for piss play, I honestly find it disgusting. However even with me hating that part, I can admit this is an excellent first chapter

Thank you for your positive comment. I apologise if you found some of the content disgusting- I hoped the tags I attached to the story would be more obvious. I'll remember this in future.

Don't care for water sports--however, overall that was very hot! Please, continue.

What a hot wet little girl you have invented. I wish I could meet a real one. I would hold her in my arms, kissing her as we simultaneously pissed on one another; then I would fuck her brains out!

I loved the many allusions you have in this story. I don't know how many are intended but these are the one's I spotted:

Red Riding Hood (obvious)

Alice In Wonderland (obvious)

Monica Lewinsky's Blue Dress (intended?)

Keep up the good work, off to the next chapter!!

Thanks hopkinscm for your feedback! If you like the allusions of this chapter stick around until the end- I'll think you'll like how the narrative develops, especially towards the end in chapters 5 and 6. The two you've noticed were intended, along with a little bit of 'Lolita'. The blue dress is interesting but unintended in fact! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

disgusting, but whatever turns you on I guess. it's a well written, very disgusting story.

How many stories draw you in almost against your will, not many.

Will have to keep reading.