by H_Bateman
How many stories draw you in almost against your will, not many.
Will have to keep reading.
disgusting, but whatever turns you on I guess. it's a well written, very disgusting story.
Thanks hopkinscm for your feedback! If you like the allusions of this chapter stick around until the end- I'll think you'll like how the narrative develops, especially towards the end in chapters 5 and 6. The two you've noticed were intended, along with a little bit of 'Lolita'. The blue dress is interesting but unintended in fact! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
I loved the many allusions you have in this story. I don't know how many are intended but these are the one's I spotted:
Red Riding Hood (obvious)
Alice In Wonderland (obvious)
Monica Lewinsky's Blue Dress (intended?)
Keep up the good work, off to the next chapter!!
What a hot wet little girl you have invented. I wish I could meet a real one. I would hold her in my arms, kissing her as we simultaneously pissed on one another; then I would fuck her brains out!
Don't care for water sports--however, overall that was very hot! Please, continue.
Thank you for your positive comment. I apologise if you found some of the content disgusting- I hoped the tags I attached to the story would be more obvious. I'll remember this in future.
I'm not here for piss play, I honestly find it disgusting. However even with me hating that part, I can admit this is an excellent first chapter