by HDTopper
never put sexual violence of any kind in any catagory other than NONCONSENT/RELUCTANCE. don't talk about it don't hint at it don't mention it they have seperate catagories for a reason USE THEM PROPERLY or stop writing
ignore the other anon retard... non-consent/reluctance wasnt the main theme, and truly, it was only attempted, ergo, can go anywhere else...
Otherwise half of the Sci-Fi/NonHuman story's I read would belong there... hell by his description, if anything non-consensual/reluctance is even mentioned, like a news reporter saying a woman and/or man was raped it doesn't belong in any other section...
get the fuck off LR damn troll
I loved this story. The two earlier commenters refrain from acknowledging what a fantastic writer you are. No general, or over-used vernacular. I found your writing to be refreshing. Yes there was domination - which I think was done tastefully, and yes there was a 'Daddy' theme, but this is incest, and it was role-play. I loved it. I loved it so much I favorited it - which I haven't done for many. Please keep up the good work.
Good story. Lived the plot, could expanded on the romance side of it more but still great work. Also ignore the trolls this story they only roleplay it and even then she isnt relucant at all in any way.
the best thing you can do is delete all stories and break your computer so you wont post anymore trash.
A big brother's big stiff prick is naturally at home in his kid sister's pretty little twat. Face it, it's happening all the time, a boy unloads his brotherly balls up his sis's cute little cunt, sis cums like crazy, and they do it over and over again. A baby sister's cunt is made to be filled and stretched by her big brother's big prick, just like a boy's young prick is made to keep his baby sister's sweet little twat happy as a clam.
don t know why those stupid story are still on this site,the writer is probably not capable to a hard on,hope they don t put no more story from that writer stupid bastard.
Embrace him, he will lead to places you don't even suspect, and make you realize that garbled efforts like this, conceived and written in haste, should be treated as objects of shame and ridicule. Try harder next time, and try reading something by other authors so you learn how to construct a sentence. One star, because you made the effort, you just didn't put very much into it.
I don't have a problem with the storyline, but your grammar made it difficult to really enjoy the story. I encourage you to find a patient editor.