by howiepumpser6
I think we all realize that the fears of three headed babies is unwarranted, and that with some shared rehearsals and practice Trish will find how correct Jackie is about elasticity
looking forward to the next several chapters
Little Tish is a fast learner and has a very good teacher, your best chapter so far
This was some of the best bro/sis action I have ever read, simple as that! You did the right thing and put this part in Trishs perspective, it gives the whole experience that special note that only girls can perceive and her "diabolical" plan was fun to observe. With all that done she now clearly sees that those 3-headed babies are just a myth to scare siblings from each other, but still I wouldn't mind if you stretch it out before they finally do it for real - keep the romance and suspense going because it's great. And now I'm dying to see how BJ reacts to the outcome of Trishs plan, jilling to it and in full support I bet :)
You decision to with with chapters does make me sad because it'll be some time 'till the next one but also gives me new hope for some of the best stories to read in the future. Just try not to post more than 1 per day or I'll have to take time off just to read them promptly each time.
Well this one deserves a lot more than the mousy 5* I'm giving it but that's all I can give you for now, sorry.