All Comments on 'Living the Dream'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Enticing

The best stories are the ones that make you want to emulate the characters ....... can't wait for the next time I ride a roller coaster!

More of Lizzie, please.

labman34labman34over 13 years ago
Well Done

I really enjoyed your work...look forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great start

Really enjoyable story and very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story!

Please carry on, cannot waite to read more! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More More

Yes please give us more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

Excellent start to what could be a fantastic series. Very well written. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

outstanding

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
so close to home....

A great story! Hard to believe it's your first submission here. Congratulations on a wonderful beginning; now just write a lot more LOL.

EliphaletEliphaletover 13 years ago

Very nice! I've bookmarked you, so I can read more about Young Lizzy!!!

roadieroadieover 13 years ago
Nicely done!

Enjoyed your story, CMU !!

Hope we hear more ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More please!

Nice work. I hope you choose to continue the story.

nudestwomannudestwomanover 12 years ago
theme parks

great story. not a small town girl, but into exhibitionism, i have done the same as lizzy, the only difference is that i wore a very short skirt, instead of shorts. i am impressed with the telling. please continue.

vixen (yes, that is my name)

nudistunite@yahoo.com

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