All Comments on 'Loaned Out'

must suck to be you loser.

despite what some nameless person thinks. I would have liked to seen a longer story with more detail. A second chapter perhaps? Either way I would look forward to reading more material you have to offer Literotica.

behind anonymity. "You suck loser" doesn't qualify as commenting. It qualifies as boredom.

I liked the story. I liked the abandon in it. I want to know more about what your husband has made you do, and what else you've done with or without his knowledge.

Dreamer

like Larry says, the writing's so good it could have stood up to more detail, a bit more depth of emotion. Fantastic first story, thanks...Mancelt.