by AELado
like Larry says, the writing's so good it could have stood up to more detail, a bit more depth of emotion. Fantastic first story, thanks...Mancelt.
behind anonymity. "You suck loser" doesn't qualify as commenting. It qualifies as boredom.
I liked the story. I liked the abandon in it. I want to know more about what your husband has made you do, and what else you've done with or without his knowledge.
Dreamer
despite what some nameless person thinks. I would have liked to seen a longer story with more detail. A second chapter perhaps? Either way I would look forward to reading more material you have to offer Literotica.