All Comments on 'Logan and Lauren Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE!!!

More please!!! I love these two!!

Prttyrckstr101Prttyrckstr101over 11 years ago
Good update, but....

Only one page? Really you keep us waiting for 2 months for one page? Please try to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
right

he was very quick to forgive, well written as all these have been this one just felt a bit rushed.

DnaebugsDnaebugsover 11 years ago

I love this story and I cannot wait until the next installment. I was wondering can you let Tristan,Lauren, and Logan have a working menage relationship. Tristan is such a sweetie I really want him to be with Lauren but I want Logan to stay together. I really think that their relationship is to perfect though. You are a wonderful writer and I cannot wait until to read whatever you publish. Well I can wait but I don't want to LOL

EmeraldTaurusEmeraldTaurusover 11 years ago
No Threesome

I really love this story, and I would love it if Tristian has a spin off, but PLEASE NO threesome between Logan, Lauren, and Tristian!!!!

StMaartenFreakStMaartenFreakover 11 years ago

I agree with EmeraldTaurus I do not want a threesome!!! Just do a spin off for Tristan. But no threesome. Anyways its quite obvious Logan would never want to share Lauren especially with Tristan lol

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2over 11 years ago
WOW

Welcome back been missing this story thanks for the update please update again real soon!!

F_WhateverF_Whateverover 11 years ago
Very nice!

It started a little awkward (but hot as hell) and then it progressed very smoothly from there. You have a nice plot here, congratulations!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wat the fuck!?

What the hell?! u hav a great story but y the fuk wuld u make the lauren break up with him after ALL OF THAT?! nd for such a stupid fucking reason! after reading that, that really ruined the whole story. watch wat u let the characters do cuz it can really b a turn off nd it was and still is a turn off! wtf! ...crazy, just ruined the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTUNUE THE STORY UNTIL THEY ARE MARRIED WITH KIDS PLEEEEEEEASE THAT WOULD COMPLETE ME :) PLEAAASE I LOVE IT SO FAR AND EEEEEEENOUGH WITH THE LONG WAITS IT'S VERY IRRITATING

jazz1190jazz1190over 11 years ago

More more more this story can continue til there married with babies.. a big happy fsmily

mrskelleymrskelleyover 11 years ago
More of them!!!!!

Please continue until they are married with children!

zetagirlzetagirlover 11 years ago
Sooooo good

I can't wait for more Pleaaaaase soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Dumbaxx

That's the point!!! If Lauren didn't break things off with Logan then there'd be no point in their steamy, hot graduation sex. (Which, may I add, is the best kind of sex ;)

quietman200quietman200almost 11 years ago

Graduation sex or makeup sex? LOL! Can't wait till the next one.

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