All Comments on 'Lonely Rhodes Ch. 05'

What a wonderful story

Amen to the whole series.

Thanks for a great story.

Nice character and scenario development. Thanks!

how does such a good tale come to have so few views

A great series! Thank you!

I am from Chicago, so you caught my attention from the beginning. She was not an arrogant "I am everything and you are nothing without me" star, so it was easy to listen to this story. The only problem I saw is you allow anyone to leave a comment and someone hoping for attention decided to think they were an English teacher. It is unfortunate that sense is not common. I am starting "What If" and will continue to go through the rest of your story submissions. Thank you for sharing your writing talents.

This is one of those stories I come back too when a pick-me- up is needed. Such a wonderful Romance.

DP

Ever thought of additional chapters? The story line is great and well written.

I love a happy end-ing... with foreshadow and room for mor

A story that stared in Chapter 1 with such promise became a weary chore as it progressed. I gave it a 4* rating because it had a good premise although it was poorly edited and concentrated on the sex scenes too much. It could have been put out as a single chapter and nothing would have been lost. The plot was predictable with the requisite mid-story tension and the regular sex episodes. The attempted kidnap/murder was a bit silly and the two month hiatus during her world tour (and the possible sexual infidelities hinted at, but never resolved) did give a bit of uncertainty, but the story was so formulaic that there was never any question as to where it was going.