All Comments on 'Lonesome Harvest Ch. 03'

by Yeswayted69

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shin_odjnshin_odjnover 12 years ago
dont listen to these guys

can't wait until tomorrow for part 4

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 12 years ago
You know what?

This is actually a nicely told tale so far. The fact that each installment is so short seems to work---so far. The dialogue flows; the story is interesting! This reader is looking forward to the next chapter.

mexbearlllmexbearlllover 12 years ago
OUT STANDING

Don't worry what some may say,keep going just the way you are,it's getting to be very intresting they way you are writing it.IF THEY DON'T LIKE THEY DON'T NEED TO READ IT.....

AfoojaAfoojaover 12 years ago
One fine soap opera on your hands

This is simple, innocent and sexy. I love everyone and all that is going on. Take it all and weave it into a fine, sexy soap opera that can last a long time. You'll have plenty of happy readers.

26thNC26thNCalmost 2 years ago

Old cuck and whore story. Nothing has changed.

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