All Comments on 'Long Dark Nights - Kai's Story Ch. 03'

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SuperErect221SuperErect221about 9 years ago
More Chapters

Can you make more of this story? I love it. I would to see this story as a movie.

maxsteelemaxsteelealmost 8 years ago
I really hope you continue this.

This story is going great, even though Kai got betrayed in this chapter. Please finish it.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Sorry for him

I think Sophia did a bad thing all along. She enticed him into thinking she felt a special deep love then offered to keep him as a pet. Someone, maybe her real husband, should kick her ass for humiliating Kai. Kai may be different but that doesn't mean he is an animal or a toy. He should be loved for himself not as a trophy.

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