All Comments on 'Long Day's End'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Predictible

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it.

I loved how he shows his loving caring side at the end. Well written. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Best story i've read on here so far. Would love to read some more from this author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Getting the feeling it's her husband. Which made the story more erotic and sensual. Best story I've read on here so far. great job.

JS_PhotoJS_Photoalmost 5 years ago
Great description

Could be longer but good story. Would like to see this kind of story as non-consensual or reluctant, or maybe a friend or neighbor controlling the action.

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