All Comments on 'Longings'

Hey buddy, liked your writing style. Nothing too coarse and loud. Got a sort of a male Mills n Boon style .. if you know what I mean .. Keep it up .. Hope to read more of your stuff ahead.

Outstanding first story. I hope to read more of the same from you.

Good story. Short concise with little wasted effort and just enough eroticism. Keep them coming. This is good. What gave you the idea? Or is this the voice of experience? ;-)

Well .. what can I say ? I am overwhelmed ... thanks for all your supportive comments ... actually I realised that stories which are coarse in nature do not ring home any message .... the best example would be that if you write one and then read the same after 3 days, you yourself would screw up your face in disgust ... And CHAGRINED, no this is not the voice of experience ... :-) .. Would try and keep writing more.

and the same happens in our dreams, thoughts and yearnings. TK U MLJ LV NV