All Comments on 'Looking Forward'

Your narrator gets to make love to a beautiful woman he cares for, she gets the buzz of explosing her writhing body to passing strangers and those lucky buggers get a free sex show.<br>

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So, have they ever made love in front of people in the same room, either without the others' knowledge (in a secluded restaurant booth) or blatantly (in an intimate setting, such as a hot tub with friends, or a sauna)? I'm not suggesting any kind of swap -- they seem too much of a couple for that -- but making gentle love next to another couple doing the same would surely be the ultimate buzz for this sexy lady.<br>

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(One suggestion: it would be nice if you characters had names, and a little more dialogue.)

What happened after you went back inside. Thanks