All Comments on 'Loose Ends'

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Timtom12Timtom12about 7 years ago
A never ending loop!

I guess Abigail has become the slave... She can never say no, she MUST respond to the pleas of her next victim.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Was expecting a twist that never came

Right around the middle when Abigail was getting distracted by Sarah, I was kind of hoping that Sarah also had the same power and was turning it around on Abigail somehow. Anyway fun story anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So for all that discussion

There is no mess to clean up because there is no challenge. No one can resist her and after awhile, there is neither challenge nor desire. How many sex slaves are enough? 10? 20? 100? If 18 yr olds are good, would 8 yr olds be better? If they aren't people, then age is a just a number, a new challenge. Maybe 98 yr olds would be ideal for control? You could demand their OAS cheques and never work while leaving out in the cold to die off. Or the sick and infirm.

Sex is a good, but this isn't about sex, it's about power and doing anything and everything you want to anyone you want because you set the rules.

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