All Comments on 'Lori and Daddy at the ABS'

I cant beleive it but this was really hot. I am sticky after reading it...so that tells u it was HOTT...tnx

Quit writing in present tense. It fucks the story up. Of course, the illiterate mindless bots on here won't mind.

Interesting and original idea, but as someone who has worked in an ABS, the booths aren't big enough for three people, so it makes the store a little unrealistic.

work on adding more detail, but I gave it 5 for debauchery.

Please go back to high school and learn some grammar. This was almost too painful too read.