by txmikey50
Please go back to high school and learn some grammar. This was almost too painful too read.
work on adding more detail, but I gave it 5 for debauchery.
Interesting and original idea, but as someone who has worked in an ABS, the booths aren't big enough for three people, so it makes the store a little unrealistic.
Quit writing in present tense. It fucks the story up. Of course, the illiterate mindless bots on here won't mind.
I cant beleive it but this was really hot. I am sticky after reading it...so that tells u it was HOTT...tnx