All Comments on 'Lori Ch. 02'

I'm really enjoying your story. Keep up the good work!

GREAT - so far!! I did notice one small error... in the first part, they left their clothes in her parents room (the way it sounded to me) and here, he apparently thinks they are still in the truck?!?! Still -- let the next part come soon - it's a great story!

I was so happy when I saw that this was chapter two. Chapter 1 was so great. Keep em cumin. literally.

Great job!

Hope there will be additional stories. Your writing flows naturally and seems realistic.

I love it! Keep up the great work!

Oh, to have the stamina of these eighteen-year-olds. They can go at it again and again--a little rest, and do it some more. A great story--that's why it's rated so highly.

A great continuation to the story.

Keeping up the action and line...

This series is so erotic. Everyone's first time should be like this; not a quickie in the back seat of a car like my first time (it was hot and intense - but loving).

Now I want to read Chapter One! :+)))