All Comments on 'Lost'

HOPE YOU DON'T WAIT TO LONG TO FOLLOW UP .. BUT GOOD GOING

:D I hope you could update soon :D This is really good :D I hope that your update won't take long :D I'm looking forward to what she is

This is awesome. I can't wait to know more 5 *'s and a favorite.

this is a great story! Can not wait until you put out the next part. I am dying to read what she really is and if she leaves Keith. :)

It's pretty rare that I find a were story that I like.

They tend to be pretty repetitive and unoriginal.

So far I find this hot, compelling, and well written.

I actually think it is too bad that you gave the disclaimer about grammar issues, as none stood out to me (doesn't mean there aren't a few, but they weren't distracting) and I think Anon should have given the story a chance.

I look forward to reading more.

WHAT IS SHE?

That was cruel....I can still hear the fading echo of your evil laughter.

You so better keep this going. This was not a sequel but chapter two of many to come. And they need to keep coming.

Don't bother apologizing about editing issues. Do your best and put it out here. I didn't catch anything serious enough to disrupt the story. A good story trumps such issues anyway. This is a good story.

Ugh cliff hanger...i gotta know what she is :'(

Thanks guys, sorry for the cliff hanger but I'd already started that trend and well, wouldn't want to break it. ;) I've already started the third part, now if only I knew where it was going. I figured you guys didn't want to wait any longer for this segment.

Regarding the warning, I'm out of luck no matter what I do, I've had people get pissed at me over errors so I figured this just cuts most of them off. Just as an FYI, it's not for lack of effort, anyone who assumes so has no idea what it's like to struggle with things like spelling and grammar. This was written months ago, it took this long to get cleaned up. Yes I have other people check it, most of the time I never hear back so I eventually give up. Honestly, if it bothers someone THAT much I'd rather they didn't bother.

Geeze, now I feel bad telling you to stop apologizing! Just want you to hold your head up with pride for a good story. I appreciate clean writing as much as anyone, but a few errors never negate a good story. There will always be grammar nazis. Accept their comments as helpful observations but don't get hung up on them. If you want to let readers know you are actively working to improve the technical aspects of you writing and appreciate their patience, okie dokie. Just don't feel you need to grovel before folks who ain't posted nuthin'! ;). *cyber hug to you*

hey please tell me you're going to finish up this story please I jut find this one and it was going really well I hoping you are going to atleast tell us what kind of cat she was

You are an excellent writer! Screw those who are talking about your grammars. I can't wait till part 3 comes!!! Please make more than 3 though. Pleasssssse

So ready for part three really like this story...

Another chapter!!!

And then another. You have really hooked me with your kitty tale!!!

Don't apologize for telling me not to apologize, it's fantastic advice, something I really must remember.

Thanks again everyone, nest nasty comment I get I'll re-read what everyone here has said.

I'm hooked! Please write a 3rd kitty tale!

Please tell me there is more to this story.

A big fan

Sandra Lagos

I want to know what she is.

And to see them get a happy ending.

And read more of your skillful writing.

I hope you continued this!

What the HELL is she? We've been waiting since last June to find out. Please don't torture us any longer. Please post the next chapter. PLEASE!

I'm deeply moved by the number of requests for more I've gotten. Thank you for your continued patience. Medical issues kept me from doing any writing for months and I'm just not ready to start up again. I doubt the next chapter will bring all the answers, but hang in there. Thanks everyone!

This is a really great story, I am dying to know what happens next! Please update soon?

I need more so more. Please dont stop I need to know what happens next!!!!!

This is such a good story! Please write a part 3 I'm dying to see what happens next!!

I finally added part 3 to this story. It's called Stranger.

https://www.literotica.com/s/stranger-25

Thank you to everyone who waited so long for this chapter.

i love this. well writteen, minus a few typos. :) Speaking of which, forgive my typos... typing on my kindle.

My favorite part was when he *apologized * for wronging her! I enjoy a little noncon/forcefulness, but hate when the guy is just like "lol yah, my dick is amazing." ...so... this is Perfect!

okay i need to go read part three now! :)

So, after an unexpectedly long time I'm finally finished with this story. The forth and final story named "Found" can be found at

https://www.literotica.com/s/found-10

For anyone wanting the order it's Heat, Lost, Stranger and Found. I hope it's been worth the wait.