All Comments on 'Lost But Not Alone'

It was enjoyable to read. I would have said Cassandra for the toys name lol.... Keep on the writing. But it would be wonderful if you could make the story a bit longer. Other than that I liked it for a short read. ....

Well written. Liked her POV. The length was fine because that was what the scene was. Love to read their future steps.

... for a great introduction to your talent as a writer, This was very good, particularly for a first effort; it is always hard to actually 'dip your toe in the water' for the first time and you have done well with this - a decent length for a first story, too.

I hope you like it here at Lit, and bring us many more fine stories like this one - five stars.

good

interesting

Will there be more?