All Comments on 'Lost In The Wind'

There's a price to be paid...

...nuff said. Good little flash story.

Viscous, but original and entertaining, so worth a 5!

That's how cheaters deserve to be treated. Excellent tale.

she murdered him, over sex, now she is going after the nurse.. then a life of prison.

How do you assume to get away with an affair in that type of environment??? He needs to die for the health of the species. What a moron and good (but evil) for her.

@Anonymous - She didn't murder him. But of course he might wish she had ;-)

And I'm going to check out your other stories, now...

Thanks for the offering.

If he hadn't given her a reason this time, there would have been one eventually. Her joy in causing pain went way beyond revenge for cheating. Nice narrative about one sick puppy.

Not really a fan of the psycho BTB stories, but congrats on having the balls on doing something that's already been done to death in the cheating wives stories. Generally when it's a cheating husband, the worthless sack of shit not only gets away with it but ends up with threesomes and a host of other bullshit as well, and people will make a thousand excuses for why it was okay for him to cheat on his faithful wife.

Least she's got a reason to be somewhat psycho - his act of impregnating another lover, humiliating her in one of the worst ways you can do to a woman and basically plotting to leave her in a lurch makes a little frosty castration a mild punishment. Well, better than his lover's getting, apparently.

she should of just left him in the snow untouched. he would have froze to

death. reported him missing later. the other women well knocked up with

no man

This needs to be rewritten

just about perfect.

I like to see reconciliations, happy ever afters, etc, forgiveness.

But I honestly can't blame a wronged party for anything they do in the cloud of insanity that follows a betrayal like his was.

you know to watch out for traps, TK U MLJ LV NV

What exactly is a biochemist doing in the coldest place on Earth? I can see her being near the fringes of the pack where there is actual life to study. But at the South Pole?

Are there some kind of arctic microbes I don't know about?

If we believe in BTB then we need to read it as Burn the bastard too -

He seemed to truly be a bastard too so go get 'em girl - unfortunately she is unlikely to get away with it - better the cut he free then just leave him and not report it let them find him frozen when she reports he is not around latter - tell them he was going to make rounds after their rendezvous (it might have been logged they left the main building together -

Nothing more formidable than a woman scorned as this story nails quite delightfully. Thank you for a very powerful story short and very smooth.

BTB BRIGADES

eat shit and die annony

.Very well crafted, I would only have liked to see some confirmation that he wouldn't actually die left for 15 minutes to the Artic elements.

In the frozen Continent all is possible!!! Even make cheaters pay...3*

I look at your twisted posts and I see myself in the mirror. 5*

A certainly unique tale set in an unfamiliar setting ..... but we've all seen enough TV coverage of life in the Antarctic to understand what's between the lines...... just plain fun :-)

I have no problem with what happens to the cheating husband. Whoever cheats deserves to get Burned - male or female.

The only problem that I have with this story, is that I would have liked the non-cheater to get away with it. I like when cheaters lose and non-cheaters win.

Thanks for the story.

You really froze the bastard. This is a new place for a LW story. Really.liked it.

A quick fast story and a good one. Who needs 'The Thing's, we have Marsha!

it's good....but i can't help but feel that nasty double standard.

all a man has to do is fuck another woman, and everyone agrees he deserves some psychotic treatment. but for a woman cheating....to get the same response...well it's a work of art. she can't just cheat....that'd just be a (insert basic excuse here) and bla bla bla (can't you just get past it?)

like...she has to mock her husband, plot to do something horrible to her husband, and force him to eat creampies, or drug him.

we need more of these stories. but i'm not sure what we need more of. more cheating men that need to be truly evil before punishment, or more women getting their teeth kicked in for a simple clinical affair? i'm not sure.

Cheating bastard literally froze his nuts off. Great story.

just somehow doesn't begin to describe,,,,

Yowza! Hell hath no fury and all that.

Should we be calling this an FTB?

Now this lady is no cuckoldress.

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Wicked Awesome!

11/10Zip Ties!!!!!