All Comments on 'Lost on a Mysterious Planet Ch. 03'

by KingAaronIV

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KingAaronIVKingAaronIVover 8 years agoAuthor
Please leave feedback!

Hey guys, sorry this chapter took so long. I was trying to get it just perfect.

Remember to leave feedback, so that I can improve. I got feedback to make the chapters longer, so this one is longer than the others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Just read all three chapters, mayby a bit more story as aposed to sex to get the story moving.

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