All Comments on 'Lost Souls Ch. 01'

Liked the story. Something like a chic movie with a happy ending. But I hope this was just the buildup to a long, budding, descriptive relationship.

Really enjoyed it.

That was a fun and great read can't wait for more.

Something unexpected in this category . great job

Interested in the relationship of Alice and Brianna.

This is a really interesting story can't wait to see more.

Well done! Fucking hot; but what a heartbreaking first chapter! <3 I hope we get to read more about Alice, Brianna, and Ms. Kelts, more about how Alice came to be homeless, and how Alice's relationships with Brianna and Ms. Kelts progresses (fingers crossed for a 3 way). I'm keen to read more about this world.

It's fun to read good Futa-on-female fiction!

This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. I can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the amazing work

Hands down one.of the best stories I've read here

I'm hoping that if there's to be a romantic relationship, that it's with Kelts cause whatsherface is really undeserving. 😒

One of the best stories on here!

Already waiting a week for New chapters... that's waaayyyyyy too long..hurry hurry more more more

I really like what you started here please keep writing this it was one of the best stories I've read in a very long time.

Amazing story so far and im very much looking forward to the next one.

Im looking forward to see the story move forward,

and im probably im the minority but im actually hoping for Brianna to reform and become a good person and try to help Alice and the two of them becoming a thing.

Please right another chapter soon I absolutely loved it. I hope Brianna has the ability to reform if you choose to continue with the story. Thx

i love your story and i hope that you write more soon, keep doing you. in other words your doing fine writing as you are and writing from the heart

1. This probably should have been in non-consent or should have had some warning because most of that scene between Alice and Brianna was not consensual.

2. Brianna was violently shoving her cock down Alice's throat for 15mins?! And Alice wasn't coughing up blood from a rubbed raw throat afterward? find that hard to believe, also find it hard to believe she wouldn't have punched or squeezed Brianna's balls at some point to make her stop.

Raw but still a good structure and just plain hot!! Cant wait until chapter 2!!

You have the beginnings of a great story here

You have to add more, plzzzzz! It's been months, and I understand it is unlikely

you will continue, but this story is sooo nice right now. It would leave us with a

terrible cliffhanger if you didn't write more! :-:

Alice started out as a tough young woman,but after Brianna emotionally devastated her Alice contemplated jumping off the school roof to end her suffering.Basically in life no matter what people are all equal whether rich or poor,homeless or live in a mansion.

This story not only brought a lump to my throat but made me smile as Miss Kelts literally saved Alice's life by showing her compassion.As for Brianna I pray she gets hit by a bus for her crime,and no Brianna wasn't the least bit sorry for almost causing Alice to take that plunge or anthing else.She was more concerned about her social status.Agaiin I hope Brianna gets whats coming to her.