All Comments on 'Love and Deceit'

What a mess. So full of grammatical errors, it makes reading utterly tedious. The protagonist is a flat, uninspiring, two-dimensional character. Basically, it appears to have been written by a fifteen year old adolescent, who has been unable to pass an English class since fourth grade.

Plot, characterisation, grammar, usage - the works.

No change from your earlier work.

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