All Comments on 'Love at Last Ch. 03-05'

by Arabic_Beauty22

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redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

hows the friend still breathing i hope

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

I hope he tells her the truth.

firerose78firerose78over 10 years ago
love it

Looking forward to the next installment.

JonRKnightkyolee71JonRKnightkyolee71over 10 years ago
Love It!

I love this series. I can't wait to find out what happens. I hope he's honest. I'm sure she will accept him. I like that you make him more human and not a typical vampire.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago
Good story

Keep going! I want to know how it ends!

dilettantish_reflibrariandilettantish_reflibrarianabout 10 years ago
Great use of language

The way you used the foreign phrases so sparingly, and realistically, is so great. I'm also really hoping to learn what happens when he tells her about his "vampireness."

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love at last

I really like this story. It has so much potential, I can't believe it isn't finished. It has everything, hot sexy characters, great sex, vampires, innocent humans, ex's, bff's... At least let her react to finding out she's in love with a vamp...

Tariel_86Tariel_86almost 7 years ago
More please?

Your fans need to know what happens please!

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