by LadyDizzy
This was a very good story of both love and non consensual and consensual activities. The majority of it was non consensual but the last part was a true love story and more of it was consensual. It certainly would have been better if it had been proof read or edited but even with the errors one knew what was meant. I am not sure what category this should have been in but once it started in this category I was hoping it would continue in this category so that I could follow it.
This is the most incredibly bad story ever. I'm glad it's fiction. It makes no sense.