All Comments on 'Love Comes Second Ch. 02'

I like your story but is he such an idiot not to see that she didn't enjoy that at all don't get me wrong enjoyed the story and love the non con part of just threw me that he seemed so blind hope that made sense do hope you update again will read no matter way go

Love the story can't wait for Ch 3!!!!!!

thank you for giving me tips! always hoping to better my writing!

I love how he is totally misreading his new wife, and how you show that conflict in their POVs. Soon, Douglas will need deeper development, but it's a good start. Looking forward to where this will go.

A well written description of a self-centered A-hole and a sweet princess who had the misfortune to marry him. Too disgusted to read further.

A rapist, possessive husband, yikes! Bad for her. Love her brother though, read him so well and his concern for his sister was too good, would like to see his romance story.

But like the style of writing, how exact same incident is lived extremely -vely and +vely by both people and just how cruel the man can get to ignore tears and cries of hurt.