All Comments on 'Love Fifty'

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Nightowl22Nightowl22over 18 years ago
Unusual

A valentines haiku of love!

damppantiesdamppantiesover 18 years ago
Wonderfully different

Particularly liked 8 and 9. 15... so true. A totally different contest entry, Og. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It amazes me to see

these short stories and how you can take fifty words and make them into something that tells a complete tale and do it so well and often. I always look forward to reading these.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Love these!

I just love these! Short, sweet reminders... they've become a tradition, now... I look forward to them. Oh, and I never liked coffee that much, anyway... :)

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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Very creative little tales! Excellent job, Og.

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Clever approach

I like how they interwove -- and how powerful just a few words, strung together in the right way, can be. ~Imp

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
Only semi-brilliant

Well, actually, it's a brilliant compilation, but I didn't want you to get the big-head.

Rumple

dreampilot79dreampilot79over 18 years ago
Great compilation

Og.. what more can be said... brilliance... and always fresh aproaches....

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
Interesting,

and insightful. I see you like your coffee the same as I like mine.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonover 18 years ago
Original

Very good, I liked it...and the Uzbekistanian judge scores 5.0

MunachiMunachiover 18 years ago
great!

how do you come up with so many ideas for so many stories, that despite being short each are complete?

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Profound

Og, every single time I read a story of yours, you amaze me with your talent. What's more, you make it all look so easy. Good luck.

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
Sorry, Og ...

I'm afraid you will have to write one of these for every contest from now on. You created a new tradition with your tiny stories. They somehow remind me of the miniature paintings of old. They may look small, but they convey a whole world.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

sacksackover 18 years ago
wonderful little gems......

like polished colorful rocks, enjoyable to "touch".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
So sweet...

I adored your mini holiday stories and looked forward to reading these as well. I was not disappointed in them at all. Fabulous job! Good luck in the contest. :)

hugo_samhugo_samabout 18 years ago
Triumph

Another triumph of short powerfull scenes for the season. Well done as always Og

Hugo

l8blooml8bloomover 17 years ago
Fun, clever, a joy for the reader

These are like a kind of sexy haiku. Write more!

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
EVERY ONE OF THESE STATEMENTS

with a little tweaking could be made into a stand alone tory. TK U MLJ LV NV

ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 6 years ago

"See, I told you there's no room on this rock," said the puffin to the penguin. "You guys are all the same."

The penguins were sad. They never stood out, not like Ogg's puffin.

yukonnightsyukonnightsover 6 years ago

Since no one else said nice things about these "little stories"....haha! Nonetheless, even though it's probably not good for you to hear so much praise in such a short space of time; Let me add my own kudos for something truly enjoyable to read !

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