by oggbashan
Particularly liked 8 and 9. 15... so true. A totally different contest entry, Og. I liked it.
these short stories and how you can take fifty words and make them into something that tells a complete tale and do it so well and often. I always look forward to reading these.
I just love these! Short, sweet reminders... they've become a tradition, now... I look forward to them. Oh, and I never liked coffee that much, anyway... :)
I like how they interwove -- and how powerful just a few words, strung together in the right way, can be. ~Imp
Well, actually, it's a brilliant compilation, but I didn't want you to get the big-head.
Rumple
Og.. what more can be said... brilliance... and always fresh aproaches....
and insightful. I see you like your coffee the same as I like mine.
Very good, I liked it...and the Uzbekistanian judge scores 5.0
how do you come up with so many ideas for so many stories, that despite being short each are complete?
Og, every single time I read a story of yours, you amaze me with your talent. What's more, you make it all look so easy. Good luck.
I'm afraid you will have to write one of these for every contest from now on. You created a new tradition with your tiny stories. They somehow remind me of the miniature paintings of old. They may look small, but they convey a whole world.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
I adored your mini holiday stories and looked forward to reading these as well. I was not disappointed in them at all. Fabulous job! Good luck in the contest. :)
Another triumph of short powerfull scenes for the season. Well done as always Og
Hugo
These are like a kind of sexy haiku. Write more!
with a little tweaking could be made into a stand alone tory. TK U MLJ LV NV
"See, I told you there's no room on this rock," said the puffin to the penguin. "You guys are all the same."
The penguins were sad. They never stood out, not like Ogg's puffin.
Since no one else said nice things about these "little stories"....haha! Nonetheless, even though it's probably not good for you to hear so much praise in such a short space of time; Let me add my own kudos for something truly enjoyable to read !