by marvel121
I really like your concept, but as I'm reading the story I am reading a lot of grammatical errors. It really takes away from the overall effect of the story. Which makes me unattached to the main character because I frequently have to reread sentences to understand what she is trying to express. I really do think this story has a lot of potential and you should definitely continue the story I just recommend either getting an editor or rereading your story a couple of times to reduce the amount of errors.
@xxspicyshrimpxx
Thanks for the support and the advice. I become too lazy at times to reread the entire things and end up with grammatical errors. It's a bad habit I know. I will try to take care of it the next time. :)
Yep, this can actually be a sweet little movie if you pinch a thing here and there. I'm getting all into it!
Evebroughtanaxthistime
When will you be releasing the next chapter. This is my official favorite Non-Reluctance series.
Hey guys m so sorry for not being able to upload the next chapter on time and that is because I am a bit busy preparing for exams that will get me into a good med school. Wish me luck everybody.
P.s. I promise to upload soon. I am not going to leave you guys hanging but i request you to bear with me.
Love you guys
Please tell me you are not done writing for this story. It has become my favorite story on literotica and I have been checking almost everyday for month for chapter 4. Please continue the story; it has great potential of becoming a long series.