by secretme
...That was awful. Haha and by awful i mean great. What a twist....Sad ending, we never really know what happens to Lily. Well, actually we do know she did 'betray' him by denying him at the trial. Better question....Why?
Well done. I'll forgive your muse if she helps you turn out work like that! What ever you do please just keep writing us stories to sink our teeth into. Great little twists and turns in these letters realy enjoyed them.
I like the way you showed what happened to lily. Made it feel more real. Put Adams Pain in real light.
again thank you for writing. I have enjoyed reading your work a lot.
You got me.......totally. Well done. I am learning never to trust a talented wordsmith.
:-) Thanks,