All Comments on 'Love of the Game'

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Orion623Orion623about 15 years ago
Very Well Done

Enjoyed this story a great deal although it would have been better placed in exhibitionist/voyeur. The ending left it up in the air as to whether Jeb and Kathy will explore a sexual relationship with Nina and Mark. It may be that the author will write a part 2 to tie up some loose ends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Beautiful

This was just a beuatiful story. I wish, the writer could come up with more of it. Just awesome....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The end ??

This was a really good story, well developed characters & exciting activity. The only problem was the ending. What happened? Did you get tired of writing. Incredibly anticlimactic !!! Create another chapter with an ending we all can appreciate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Not the kind of story I enjoy. 1 star.

Beejay3Beejay3over 1 year ago

What a rousing and exciting party/poker games. Often likely felt or thought about by many couples,

with some turning out differently than others…

Every time ramping up in sexual excitement …wondering to what limits it would progress to…

Guess we can chose an ending …as we wish…

Thanks. Enjoyable read!

Beejay3

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