All Comments on 'Love Potion'

What does this mean?

'He stepped out to the fresh of stationary that prevailed in a room full of cubicles.'

Did you want to write stationery, meaning paper? But even then it doesn't make sense.

The story is very poorly written, with many errors. Plus, there is too much tell and not enough show.

He probably meant "the fresh smell of stationary"

Mind Control? Non-consensual? Well, maybe all the mind control stories are a subset of non-consensual? I believe so. The most descriptive portions are about the slovenly lab rat. The intuitive portions are about his deviant, perverted mind. This thread would certainly merit a sequel when Akira responds with a financial backlash that entices the beast to invest his earnings in a start-up private lab enterprise which she corrupts with false contracts that are felonious in nature and both bankrupts him and gets him arrested and imprisoned whereby he becomes enamored by Bubba and his friends.