All Comments on 'Love, Sex and Money'

For a first effort, at least on this site, the story was pretty lengthy, so congrats on lots of work. I liked the story, some interesting characters and you did a good job of exploring the relationships, the anxieties and the resolution of the history. Maybe a bit too much sex, as I think you could have cut off about 25% of the story, but it did serve to show how well they fit together as a couple.