- Loving Wives
- Love Thy Enemy
- Page 20
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Looking upon me with sympathy, she answered. "Shela wanted to do that. It was her decision. However, because she was unable to articulate her words or write, she blinked what she wanted, and confirmed it the same way. Because of the legal issues involved we recorded the entire thing."
Reaching behind the counter of the nurses station, she withdrew a paper DVD sleeve and held it out to me.
"This is ta copy of that recording. It was done in the afternoon, on the day before she died."
I watched in horror, as -against my will- my arm raised up of its own accord, extending itself and my hand opened and grasped the disc.
I knew the nurse and I spoke further, and that I signed some papers, but all that I recall in detail of that afternoon was the thought that played incessantly in my head. 'Fuck! Not another goddamn video of Shela!'
- COMMENTS
LoriRobinsonGaabout 2 months agoYet another MC from this author that is over done with an emotion, in this case it is being an angry dumb ass as opposed to the whiny little bitch of the last series I read. The plot and story are pretty good but the characters are just meh.
bobareeno7 months agoSlow, slow, slow, way too drawn out. Should’ve been half the length of this.
Having each love in the hospital was over the top, one with a lost eye, the other a lost leg. I just wish the MC had enough girlfriends to enable each to lose one of the body’s dual parts, though how one nostril would go would have been a challenge.
enderlocke777 months agoEh lost me when he begged amber to move in while in France. The Mc is all over the place or he isn't as angry as he thinks.
enderlocke777 months agoOh ok found out in the next paragraph it is the Mc thats dumb I can work with that
enderlocke777 months agoYeah click on that unknown attachment sure what could go wrong lol makes it hard to read wondering if the Mc is that dumb or if it was the writer but damn i guess I'm bored enough to find out
AngelRider7 months agoI will never read 70k words on this site. No one has the chops for it. In fact, I would bet real money that I could skip pages and miss nothing from the plot.
Whenever I see lengths like this, my brain screams writing on the fly or organic writing.
rn2711over 1 year agoA very good story but too long. I feel the author did not concentrate on the plot and added unrelated details. Why did we need the wife's point of view I didn't feel it added something to the plot.
Dry_opinionabout 2 years agoNice start. Interesting plot. Unfortunately the author overused sending characters to the hospital as a way of creating drama.
