All Comments on 'Love Unrequited'

I liked the parallel between her unrequited love for Mark and Ben's for her.

A warm piece, plenty of heart, plenty of attention. Easy to read.

But you turned it around nicely. Your soft style of writing is certainly easy to read and kept my interest until the very end.

I liked the unrequited love aspect of this story, I think most of us have been there at some time in our life.

The start of a new relationship was well done as many relationships are the result of working together; so very realistic, although I am sure not all start the way Julia's did!

I really liked the male character 'Ben'. It's nice and refreshing to see a man portrayed as a mixture of testosterone, sensitivity and a few insecurities. And because I am a man I'm damn glad he got the girl!

Thanks for writing this rather romantic story.