by sunny55235
But you turned it around nicely. Your soft style of writing is certainly easy to read and kept my interest until the very end.
I liked the unrequited love aspect of this story, I think most of us have been there at some time in our life.
The start of a new relationship was well done as many relationships are the result of working together; so very realistic, although I am sure not all start the way Julia's did!
I really liked the male character 'Ben'. It's nice and refreshing to see a man portrayed as a mixture of testosterone, sensitivity and a few insecurities. And because I am a man I'm damn glad he got the girl!
Thanks for writing this rather romantic story.
A warm piece, plenty of heart, plenty of attention. Easy to read.
I liked the parallel between her unrequited love for Mark and Ben's for her.